[FE training-materials-updates] Add missing "the"

michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com
Mon Jul 9 06:53:09 CEST 2012

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commit ac69312e58acbc65b5930a79e9c088d7e65ae15b
Author: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 9 06:51:08 2012 +0200

    Add missing "the"

diff --git a/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex b/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
index 2f0d2ec..4dac223 100644
--- a/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
+++ b/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ interface IRemoteService {
     \item[explicit] The developer designates the target by its name 
     \item[implicit] There is no explicit target for the Intent. The
-      system will find best target for the Intent by itself, possibly
+      system will find the best target for the Intent by itself, possibly
       asking the user what to do if there are several matches


commit d7633ec75a2cc7ae8ced85b3cd3ecb70d7be275f
Author: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 9 06:49:05 2012 +0200

    Style improvement

diff --git a/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex b/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
index f589180..2f0d2ec 100644
--- a/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
+++ b/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
     access it, the kernel will detect it and kill this process.
   \item However, interactions between processes are sometimes needed,
     that's what IPCs are for.
-  \item On classic Linux systems, we have several IPC mechanisms used:
+  \item On classic Linux systems, several IPC mechanisms are used:
     \item Signals
     \item Semaphores


commit 3353155a824d571a9bd6bb88464e5ad8a06ff536
Author: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 9 06:47:00 2012 +0200

    "communcations" -> "communication"

diff --git a/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex b/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
index 9c36e46..f589180 100644
--- a/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
+++ b/slides/android-framework-ipc/android-framework-ipc.tex
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-\subsection[IPCs, Binder and AIDLs]{Inter-Process Communications, Binder and AIDLs}
+\subsection[IPCs, Binder and AIDLs]{Inter-Process Communication, Binder and AIDLs}
diff --git a/slides/android-native-layer-daemons/android-native-layer-daemons.tex b/slides/android-native-layer-daemons/android-native-layer-daemons.tex
index b10ce09..81f3903 100644
--- a/slides/android-native-layer-daemons/android-native-layer-daemons.tex
+++ b/slides/android-native-layer-daemons/android-native-layer-daemons.tex
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
   \item \code{rild} is the Radio Interface Layer Daemon
   \item This daemon drives the telephony stack, both voice and data
-    communications
+    communication
   \item When using the voice mode, talks directly to the baseband, but
     when issuing data transfers, relies on the kernel network stack
   \item It can handle two types of commands:
diff --git a/slides/android-native-layer-hal/android-native-layer-hal.tex b/slides/android-native-layer-hal/android-native-layer-hal.tex
index ea4093f..f0ef643 100644
--- a/slides/android-native-layer-hal/android-native-layer-hal.tex
+++ b/slides/android-native-layer-hal/android-native-layer-hal.tex
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@
     \item \code{hardware/libhardware/include/sensors.h}
   \item Radio Interface (\code{libril-vendor-version.so}) manages all
-    the communications between the baseband and \code{rild}
+    communication between the baseband and \code{rild}
     \item You can set the name of the library with the \code{rild.lib} and
       \code{rild.libargs} properties to find the library
diff --git a/slides/kernel-serial-drivers-content/kernel-serial-drivers-content.tex b/slides/kernel-serial-drivers-content/kernel-serial-drivers-content.tex
index 928ba07..befc0a7 100644
--- a/slides/kernel-serial-drivers-content/kernel-serial-drivers-content.tex
+++ b/slides/kernel-serial-drivers-content/kernel-serial-drivers-content.tex
@@ -523,7 +523,7 @@ foo_get_mctrl(struct uart_port *uart, u_int mctrl) {
   \item \emph{The termios functions describe a general terminal
       interface that is provided to control asynchronous
-      communications ports}
+      communication ports}
   \item A mechanism to control from userspace serial port parameters
     such as


commit d8e8aa947b01b24a96d2eb19dabf58b6353ef436
Merge: 9ac7041 d1a40bc
Author: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 9 06:42:04 2012 +0200

    Merge branch 'master' of git.free-electrons.com:training-materials


commit 9ac7041568db26dedea96f700194615a20386cb9
Author: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>
Date:   Mon Jul 9 06:41:33 2012 +0200

    Grammar fixes

diff --git a/slides/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks.tex b/slides/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks.tex
index 97bb5ab..356960e 100644
--- a/slides/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks.tex
+++ b/slides/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks/android-kernel-changes-wakelocks.tex
@@ -22,8 +22,8 @@
   \item Android's answer to these power management constraints is wakelocks
   \item One of the most famous Android changes, because of the
     flame wars it spawned
-  \item The main idea is instead of letting the user deciding of when
-    the devices needs to go to sleep, the kernel is set to suspend as
+  \item The main idea is instead of letting the user decide when
+    the devices need to go to sleep, the kernel is set to suspend as
     soon and as often as possible. 
   \item In the same time, Android allows applications and kernel
     drivers to voluntarily prevent the system from going to suspend,


Summary of changes:
 .../android-framework-ipc.tex                      |    6 +++---
 .../android-kernel-changes-wakelocks.tex           |    4 ++--
 .../android-native-layer-daemons.tex               |    2 +-
 .../android-native-layer-hal.tex                   |    2 +-
 .../kernel-serial-drivers-content.tex              |    2 +-
 5 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

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