[FE training-materials-updates] Misc punctuation fixes

Michael Opdenacker michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com
Tue Dec 31 22:15:32 CET 2013


Repository : git://git.free-electrons.com/training-materials.git

On branch  : master
Link       : http://git.free-electrons.com/training-materials/commit/?id=2c0965f9fb280c41060e6d5aa1c082540a4358f6

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commit 2c0965f9fb280c41060e6d5aa1c082540a4358f6
Author: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>
Date:   Tue Dec 31 22:14:39 2013 +0100

    Misc punctuation fixes
    
    Signed-off-by: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker at free-electrons.com>


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2c0965f9fb280c41060e6d5aa1c082540a4358f6
 .../sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling.tex              |    2 +-
 .../android-kernel-changes-mainline.tex            |    2 +-
 .../android-native-layer-toolbox.tex               |    2 +-
 slides/boottime-bootloader/boottime-bootloader.tex |    4 ++--
 slides/boottime-principles/boottime-principles.tex |    2 +-
 slides/sama5d3-board/sama5d3-board.tex             |    2 +-
 .../sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot.tex                  |    2 +-
 slides/sysdev-busybox/sysdev-busybox.tex           |    2 +-
 slides/sysdev-realtime/sysdev-realtime.tex         |    2 +-
 9 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/labs/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling.tex b/labs/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling.tex
index 2e68d46..4329fbb 100644
--- a/labs/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling.tex
+++ b/labs/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling/sysdev-kernel-cross-compiling.tex
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ ready-made configuration.
 Don't hesitate to visualize the new settings by running
 \code{make xconfig} afterwards!
 
-In the kernel configuration :
+In the kernel configuration:
 
 \begin{itemize}
 
diff --git a/slides/android-kernel-changes-mainline/android-kernel-changes-mainline.tex b/slides/android-kernel-changes-mainline/android-kernel-changes-mainline.tex
index b9ae26c..ffbe75e 100644
--- a/slides/android-kernel-changes-mainline/android-kernel-changes-mainline.tex
+++ b/slides/android-kernel-changes-mainline/android-kernel-changes-mainline.tex
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     merge the changes as is: either you were getting all of it, or
     none
   \item Since version 3.5, two features were included in the kernel to
-    implement opportunistic suspend :
+    implement opportunistic suspend:
     \begin{description}
     \item[autosleep] is a way to let the kernel trigger suspend or
       hibernate whenever there are no active wakeup sources.
diff --git a/slides/android-native-layer-toolbox/android-native-layer-toolbox.tex b/slides/android-native-layer-toolbox/android-native-layer-toolbox.tex
index 155146d..1e8bf01 100644
--- a/slides/android-native-layer-toolbox/android-native-layer-toolbox.tex
+++ b/slides/android-native-layer-toolbox/android-native-layer-toolbox.tex
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
   Commands available in BusyBox 1.13
   \begin{spacing}{0}
     \tiny
-    \code{[, [[ , addgroup, adduser, adjtimex, ar, arp, arping, ash, awk, basename, bbconfig, bbsh, brctl, bunzip2, busybox, bzcat, bzip2, cal, cat, catv, chat, chattr, chcon, chgrp, chmod, chown, chpasswd, chpst, chroot, chrt, chvt, cksum, clear, cmp, comm, cp, cpio, crond, crontab, cryptpw, cttyhack, cut, date, dc, dd, deallocvt, delgroup, deluser, depmod, devfsd, df, dhcprelay, diff, dirname, dmesg, dnsd, dos2unix, dpkg, dpkg_deb, du, dumpkmap, dumpleases, e2fsck, echo, ed, egrep, eject, env, envdir, envuidgid, ether_wake, expand, expr, fakeidentd, false, fbset, fbsplash, fdflush, fdformat, fdisk, fetchmail, fgrep, find, findfs, fold, free, freeramdisk, fsck, fsck_minix, ftpget, ftpput, fuser, getenforce, getopt, getsebool, getty, grep, gunzip, gzip, halt, hd, hdparm, head, hexdump, hostid, hostname, httpd, hush, hwclock, id, ifconfig, ifdown, ifenslave, ifup, inetd, init, inotifyd, insmod, install, ip, ipaddr, ipcalc, ipcrm, ipcs, iplink, iproute, iprule, iptunnel, kbd_mode, kil
 l, killall, killall5, klogd, lash, last, length, less, linux32, linux64, linuxrc, ln, load_policy, loadfont, loadkmap, logger, login, logname, logread, losetup, lpd, lpq, lpr, ls, lsattr, lsmod, lzmacat, makedevs, man, matchpathcon, md5sum, mdev, mesg, microcom, mkdir, mke2fs, mkfifo, mkfs_minix, mknod, mkswap, mktemp, modprobe, more, mount, mountpoint, msh, mt, mv, nameif, nc, netstat, nice, nmeter, nohup, nslookup, od, openvt, parse, passwd, patch, pgrep, pidof, ping, ping6, pipe_progress, pivot_root, pkill, poweroff, printenv, printf, ps, pscan, pwd, raidautorun, rdate, rdev, readahead, readlink, readprofile, realpath, reboot, renice, reset, resize, restorecon, rm, rmdir, rmmod, route, rpm, rpm2cpio, rtcwake, run_parts, runcon, runlevel, runsv, runsvdir, rx, script, sed, selinuxenabled, sendmail, seq, sestatus, setarch, setconsole, setenforce, setfiles, setfont, setkeycodes, setlogcons, setsebool, setsid, setuidgid, sh, sha1sum, showkey, slattach, sleep, softlimit, sort, split, s
 tart_stop_daemon, stat, strings, stty, su, sulogin, sum, sv, svlogd, swapoff, swapon, switch_root, sync, sysctl, syslogd, tac, tail, tar, taskset, tcpsvd, tee, telnet, telnetd, test, tftp, tftpd, time, top, touch, tr, traceroute, true, tty, ttysize, tune2fs, udhcpc, udhcpd, udpsvd, umount, uname, uncompress, unexpand, uniq, unix2dos, unlzma, unzip, uptime, usleep, uudecode, uuencode, vconfig, vi, vlock, watch, watchdog, wc, wget, which, who, whoami, xargs, yes, zcat, zcip}
+    \code{[, [[, addgroup, adduser, adjtimex, ar, arp, arping, ash, awk, basename, bbconfig, bbsh, brctl, bunzip2, busybox, bzcat, bzip2, cal, cat, catv, chat, chattr, chcon, chgrp, chmod, chown, chpasswd, chpst, chroot, chrt, chvt, cksum, clear, cmp, comm, cp, cpio, crond, crontab, cryptpw, cttyhack, cut, date, dc, dd, deallocvt, delgroup, deluser, depmod, devfsd, df, dhcprelay, diff, dirname, dmesg, dnsd, dos2unix, dpkg, dpkg_deb, du, dumpkmap, dumpleases, e2fsck, echo, ed, egrep, eject, env, envdir, envuidgid, ether_wake, expand, expr, fakeidentd, false, fbset, fbsplash, fdflush, fdformat, fdisk, fetchmail, fgrep, find, findfs, fold, free, freeramdisk, fsck, fsck_minix, ftpget, ftpput, fuser, getenforce, getopt, getsebool, getty, grep, gunzip, gzip, halt, hd, hdparm, head, hexdump, hostid, hostname, httpd, hush, hwclock, id, ifconfig, ifdown, ifenslave, ifup, inetd, init, inotifyd, insmod, install, ip, ipaddr, ipcalc, ipcrm, ipcs, iplink, iproute, iprule, iptunnel, kbd_mode, kill
 , killall, killall5, klogd, lash, last, length, less, linux32, linux64, linuxrc, ln, load_policy, loadfont, loadkmap, logger, login, logname, logread, losetup, lpd, lpq, lpr, ls, lsattr, lsmod, lzmacat, makedevs, man, matchpathcon, md5sum, mdev, mesg, microcom, mkdir, mke2fs, mkfifo, mkfs_minix, mknod, mkswap, mktemp, modprobe, more, mount, mountpoint, msh, mt, mv, nameif, nc, netstat, nice, nmeter, nohup, nslookup, od, openvt, parse, passwd, patch, pgrep, pidof, ping, ping6, pipe_progress, pivot_root, pkill, poweroff, printenv, printf, ps, pscan, pwd, raidautorun, rdate, rdev, readahead, readlink, readprofile, realpath, reboot, renice, reset, resize, restorecon, rm, rmdir, rmmod, route, rpm, rpm2cpio, rtcwake, run_parts, runcon, runlevel, runsv, runsvdir, rx, script, sed, selinuxenabled, sendmail, seq, sestatus, setarch, setconsole, setenforce, setfiles, setfont, setkeycodes, setlogcons, setsebool, setsid, setuidgid, sh, sha1sum, showkey, slattach, sleep, softlimit, sort, split, st
 art_stop_daemon, stat, strings, stty, su, sulogin, sum, sv, svlogd, swapoff, swapon, switch_root, sync, sysctl, syslogd, tac, tail, tar, taskset, tcpsvd, tee, telnet, telnetd, test, tftp, tftpd, time, top, touch, tr, traceroute, true, tty, ttysize, tune2fs, udhcpc, udhcpd, udpsvd, umount, uname, uncompress, unexpand, uniq, unix2dos, unlzma, unzip, uptime, usleep, uudecode, uuencode, vconfig, vi, vlock, watch, watchdog, wc, wget, which, who, whoami, xargs, yes, zcat, zcip}
   \end{spacing}
 \end{frame}
 
diff --git a/slides/boottime-bootloader/boottime-bootloader.tex b/slides/boottime-bootloader/boottime-bootloader.tex
index bcd91c4..7b5f3ae 100644
--- a/slides/boottime-bootloader/boottime-bootloader.tex
+++ b/slides/boottime-bootloader/boottime-bootloader.tex
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ Usually, bootloaders include many features needed only for
 development.
 \begin{itemize}
 	\item There may be different bootloaders for your board. Try
-		those !
+		those!
 	\item Assess what features you really need. Do you need to
-		upgrade from the bootloader ?
+		upgrade from the bootloader?
 	\item Remove the boot delay! For \code{u-boot}, then have a look
 		at the \code{CONFIG_ZERO_BOOTDELAY_CHECK} option, documented in
 		\code{doc/README.autoboot} that will allow you to still enter
diff --git a/slides/boottime-principles/boottime-principles.tex b/slides/boottime-principles/boottime-principles.tex
index 7607cf2..251f824 100644
--- a/slides/boottime-principles/boottime-principles.tex
+++ b/slides/boottime-principles/boottime-principles.tex
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ Some ideas to keep in mind while trying to reduce the boot time:
 \item The fastest code is code that is not executed
 \item A big part of booting is actually loading code and data from the
       storage to RAM. Reading less means booting faster. I/O are
-      expensive !
+      expensive!
 \item The root filesystem may take longer to mount if it is bigger.
 \item So, even code that is not executed can make your boot time
       longer.
diff --git a/slides/sama5d3-board/sama5d3-board.tex b/slides/sama5d3-board/sama5d3-board.tex
index f3dd0b9..56aace8 100644
--- a/slides/sama5d3-board/sama5d3-board.tex
+++ b/slides/sama5d3-board/sama5d3-board.tex
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
     \column{0.6\textwidth}
     \begin{itemize}
       \item Atmel SAMA5D3x embedded MPU (cortex A5 at 536MHz)
-      \item 4 Gb DDR2, 2 Gb NAND Flash, 128 Mb NOR , 32 Mb SPI Serial DataFlash
+      \item 4 Gb DDR2, 2 Gb NAND Flash, 128 Mb NOR, 32 Mb SPI Serial DataFlash
       \item Ethernet 10/100/1Gb
       \item Two USB 2.0 Hosts, one USB 2.0 Host/Device
       \item 5.0” WVGA resistive TFT LCD module with four QTouch keys
diff --git a/slides/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot.tex b/slides/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot.tex
index 575d401..2fb98d4 100644
--- a/slides/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot.tex
+++ b/slides/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot/sysdev-bootloaders-u-boot.tex
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ U-Boot 2013.04 (May 29 2013 - 10:30:21)
   \item \code{help} and \code{help command}
   \item \code{boot}, runs the default boot command, stored in
     \code{bootcmd}
-  \item \code{bootm <address>} , starts a kernel image loaded at the
+  \item \code{bootm <address>}, starts a kernel image loaded at the
     given address in RAM
   \item \code{ext2load}, loads a file from an ext2 filesystem to RAM
     \begin{itemize}
diff --git a/slides/sysdev-busybox/sysdev-busybox.tex b/slides/sysdev-busybox/sysdev-busybox.tex
index aaacf97..90ba84f 100644
--- a/slides/sysdev-busybox/sysdev-busybox.tex
+++ b/slides/sysdev-busybox/sysdev-busybox.tex
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
   Commands available in BusyBox 1.13
   \begin{spacing}{0}
     \tiny
-    \code{[, [[ , addgroup, adduser, adjtimex, ar, arp, arping, ash, awk, basename, bbconfig, bbsh, brctl, bunzip2, busybox, bzcat, bzip2, cal, cat, catv, chat, chattr, chcon, chgrp, chmod, chown, chpasswd, chpst, chroot, chrt, chvt, cksum, clear, cmp, comm, cp, cpio, crond, crontab, cryptpw, cttyhack, cut, date, dc, dd, deallocvt, delgroup, deluser, depmod, devfsd, df, dhcprelay, diff, dirname, dmesg, dnsd, dos2unix, dpkg, dpkg_deb, du, dumpkmap, dumpleases, e2fsck, echo, ed, egrep, eject, env, envdir, envuidgid, ether_wake, expand, expr, fakeidentd, false, fbset, fbsplash, fdflush, fdformat, fdisk, fetchmail, fgrep, find, findfs, fold, free, freeramdisk, fsck, fsck_minix, ftpget, ftpput, fuser, getenforce, getopt, getsebool, getty, grep, gunzip, gzip, halt, hd, hdparm, head, hexdump, hostid, hostname, httpd, hush, hwclock, id, ifconfig, ifdown, ifenslave, ifup, inetd, init, inotifyd, insmod, install, ip, ipaddr, ipcalc, ipcrm, ipcs, iplink, iproute, iprule, iptunnel, kbd_mode, kil
 l, killall, killall5, klogd, lash, last, length, less, linux32, linux64, linuxrc, ln, load_policy, loadfont, loadkmap, logger, login, logname, logread, losetup, lpd, lpq, lpr, ls, lsattr, lsmod, lzmacat, makedevs, man, matchpathcon, md5sum, mdev, mesg, microcom, mkdir, mke2fs, mkfifo, mkfs_minix, mknod, mkswap, mktemp, modprobe, more, mount, mountpoint, msh, mt, mv, nameif, nc, netstat, nice, nmeter, nohup, nslookup, od, openvt, parse, passwd, patch, pgrep, pidof, ping, ping6, pipe_progress, pivot_root, pkill, poweroff, printenv, printf, ps, pscan, pwd, raidautorun, rdate, rdev, readahead, readlink, readprofile, realpath, reboot, renice, reset, resize, restorecon, rm, rmdir, rmmod, route, rpm, rpm2cpio, rtcwake, run_parts, runcon, runlevel, runsv, runsvdir, rx, script, sed, selinuxenabled, sendmail, seq, sestatus, setarch, setconsole, setenforce, setfiles, setfont, setkeycodes, setlogcons, setsebool, setsid, setuidgid, sh, sha1sum, showkey, slattach, sleep, softlimit, sort, split, s
 tart_stop_daemon, stat, strings, stty, su, sulogin, sum, sv, svlogd, swapoff, swapon, switch_root, sync, sysctl, syslogd, tac, tail, tar, taskset, tcpsvd, tee, telnet, telnetd, test, tftp, tftpd, time, top, touch, tr, traceroute, true, tty, ttysize, tune2fs, udhcpc, udhcpd, udpsvd, umount, uname, uncompress, unexpand, uniq, unix2dos, unlzma, unzip, uptime, usleep, uudecode, uuencode, vconfig, vi, vlock, watch, watchdog, wc, wget, which, who, whoami, xargs, yes, zcat, zcip}
+    \code{[, [[, addgroup, adduser, adjtimex, ar, arp, arping, ash, awk, basename, bbconfig, bbsh, brctl, bunzip2, busybox, bzcat, bzip2, cal, cat, catv, chat, chattr, chcon, chgrp, chmod, chown, chpasswd, chpst, chroot, chrt, chvt, cksum, clear, cmp, comm, cp, cpio, crond, crontab, cryptpw, cttyhack, cut, date, dc, dd, deallocvt, delgroup, deluser, depmod, devfsd, df, dhcprelay, diff, dirname, dmesg, dnsd, dos2unix, dpkg, dpkg_deb, du, dumpkmap, dumpleases, e2fsck, echo, ed, egrep, eject, env, envdir, envuidgid, ether_wake, expand, expr, fakeidentd, false, fbset, fbsplash, fdflush, fdformat, fdisk, fetchmail, fgrep, find, findfs, fold, free, freeramdisk, fsck, fsck_minix, ftpget, ftpput, fuser, getenforce, getopt, getsebool, getty, grep, gunzip, gzip, halt, hd, hdparm, head, hexdump, hostid, hostname, httpd, hush, hwclock, id, ifconfig, ifdown, ifenslave, ifup, inetd, init, inotifyd, insmod, install, ip, ipaddr, ipcalc, ipcrm, ipcs, iplink, iproute, iprule, iptunnel, kbd_mode, kill
 , killall, killall5, klogd, lash, last, length, less, linux32, linux64, linuxrc, ln, load_policy, loadfont, loadkmap, logger, login, logname, logread, losetup, lpd, lpq, lpr, ls, lsattr, lsmod, lzmacat, makedevs, man, matchpathcon, md5sum, mdev, mesg, microcom, mkdir, mke2fs, mkfifo, mkfs_minix, mknod, mkswap, mktemp, modprobe, more, mount, mountpoint, msh, mt, mv, nameif, nc, netstat, nice, nmeter, nohup, nslookup, od, openvt, parse, passwd, patch, pgrep, pidof, ping, ping6, pipe_progress, pivot_root, pkill, poweroff, printenv, printf, ps, pscan, pwd, raidautorun, rdate, rdev, readahead, readlink, readprofile, realpath, reboot, renice, reset, resize, restorecon, rm, rmdir, rmmod, route, rpm, rpm2cpio, rtcwake, run_parts, runcon, runlevel, runsv, runsvdir, rx, script, sed, selinuxenabled, sendmail, seq, sestatus, setarch, setconsole, setenforce, setfiles, setfont, setkeycodes, setlogcons, setsebool, setsid, setuidgid, sh, sha1sum, showkey, slattach, sleep, softlimit, sort, split, st
 art_stop_daemon, stat, strings, stty, su, sulogin, sum, sv, svlogd, swapoff, swapon, switch_root, sync, sysctl, syslogd, tac, tail, tar, taskset, tcpsvd, tee, telnet, telnetd, test, tftp, tftpd, time, top, touch, tr, traceroute, true, tty, ttysize, tune2fs, udhcpc, udhcpd, udpsvd, umount, uname, uncompress, unexpand, uniq, unix2dos, unlzma, unzip, uptime, usleep, uudecode, uuencode, vconfig, vi, vlock, watch, watchdog, wc, wget, which, who, whoami, xargs, yes, zcat, zcip}
   \end{spacing}
 \end{frame}
 
diff --git a/slides/sysdev-realtime/sysdev-realtime.tex b/slides/sysdev-realtime/sysdev-realtime.tex
index 8e8ae57..81a0eb8 100644
--- a/slides/sysdev-realtime/sysdev-realtime.tex
+++ b/slides/sysdev-realtime/sysdev-realtime.tex
@@ -1251,7 +1251,7 @@ ret = bind(s, (struct sockaddr *)&saddr, sizeof(saddr));
       API. Easier to learn and understand. Certainly the way to go for
       new applications.
     \end{itemize}
-  \item Applications should include \code{<native/service.h>} , where
+  \item Applications should include \code{<native/service.h>}, where
     \code{service} can be \code{alarm}, \code{buffer}, \code{cond},
     \code{event}, \code{heap}, \code{intr}, \code{misc}, \code{mutex},
     \code{pipe}, \code{queue}, \code{sem}, \code{task}, \code{timer}



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